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That was probably a bad decision to make.

Once you were outside the door, the heavy feeling of fear weighed on your chest again, and you froze for a brief moment.

Clutching the pillow closer, you chewed your lip, shifting your weight from foot to foot, wondering where to go next. Just as you were about to take another step, before you could react, a shadowy figure darted out from another room, and swept you into strong arms, before darting into another room. Yo squeaked, startled, and only yelped once again when you were plopped down onto a soft bed.

You stared up into light blue eyes as a certain Frenchman towered over you. "Mon cher, I apologize for randomly snatching you up like that..." he sheepishly rubbed the back of his neck. "It was a little unfair, seeing as how you weren't seeing it coming," he grinned at you again. "I would like to get to know you, though~!" he winked playfully at you. "After all, if my friend and I are going to be keeping you here, we should get to know each other, oui?"

You nodded hesitantly, still holding the Italian flag pillow tightly. "R-Right...I guess so," you answered carefully, now avoiding his gaze. The Frenchman sat next to you, and rested his elbow on his knee, supporting his head with his fist as he watched you struggle to come up with something to say, shyly hiding your face partly behind the pillow.

He found it quite cute - not in a romantic way, but in the way one would find a kitten cute.

And that's exactly what you reminded him of; a kitten. You were so cute and sweet, although you didn't trust easily, and you seemed like you would be a good pillow, or a good cuddler.

But what troubled him the most was that you seemed as though you were never safe. He felt so strongly for you, although he didn't know you well enough as of yet; he wanted to consider you a friend, maybe even as a sister.

He was unsure if he was right, but he was fairly sure that you underwent prolonged abuse, possibly for more than a day.

You mumbled something, causing his to snap out of his daydream. "Hm? Can you please repeat that?" he politely requested, refraining from touching you due to your fear of being touched. You cleared your throat.

"u-uhh...I-I" you stammered, trying and failing to say what you said, although you were afraid it would not be a very successful conversation starter.

" favorite color is (f/c)?" you finally told him, burying your face into the pillow again, feeling overly sheepish. He chuckled. "That's interesting. What do you like about that color?" he asked gently, urging you to continue the conversation.

"I-I...I don't know...I guess I just find the color nice," you pulled the pillow a little away from your face, but only enough for your eyes to show again. "...What's your favorite color?" you asked in reply, hoping the conversation could carry on for a while.

As you conversed with France for at least twenty minutes or so, you found yourself slowly beginning to loosen up, although, you were still too afraid to tell him of the abuse you went through. It occured to you that not all people were bad; there were some people like Mr. Francis.

Obviously, your father was not like Mr. Francis; he was lazy, and uncaring, he was cruel and beat you as hard as he could. It was that very abuse that had weakened you; made you into someone your mother didn't want you to be, made you into a weak human being, a person who you did not want to be. You wanted strength and courage, something that was just naturally unattainable for someone like you, although it was all you ever dreamed of.


Italy walked out of the clothing store with his friend, wondering how some people could love shopping so much. It was actually very exhausting, to him, to find clothes that fit right, and would fit to the tastes of the person he was buying for. What made it worse was that the person he was buying for was not with him. Therefore, he knew nothing of her clothing size. So, the best he could do was a small.

Hungary, fortunately, was going to be coming over, too, though! Perhaps she would be of some help to you?

Letting out a tired breath, Feli started toward America's house, hopeful that you will like the clothes, and hopeful that you will be able to trust Hungary.

And, hopefully, you'll finally tell them what really happened.

Hetalia x Abused!Reader - Part 8by PastaPyro567

Literature / Fan Fiction / Drama©2014-2015 PastaPyro567
Hello, hello!

I know I haven't updated in a while
I apologize! ;3; 

Business...and a huge fiasco with switching accounts and shit, which I will under no circumstances tell the story of, seeing as how it's extremely boring and stupid. Anyway! I'm also sorry this is so short! But Premium Membership day is almost upon us, therefore, I wanted to get this done! 

So! I own nothing!

part VII:…
part VIII: You're already here, silly! >w<
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Storymakerdressuper Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015
la in love  Please make MOAR I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
lovekitsunenaru Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool i like your story i bet the next part will be awesome ............. but r u going to do a next part ?? or have some one finish for you 
amber14703 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
n-next please?
Namara-Gyllban Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
more please!Racing Girl Emoji (Pretty Please Onegai) [V3] 
InsightfulPsychopath Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  New member
Please update as soon as it if convenient for you (please be soon), this is fantastic and I look forward to it.
Hetalialover101anime Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
pls make more
O god the waitijg is killing me!!!, please make mohe!!,!
Lizardhero123 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
Cricket: Please put up more when you have time. This is a very amazing story, not to mention realistic. 
ukraineisofficial Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
Can you update pwease 😁
ILoveFictionBoys Featured By Owner Edited Oct 27, 2014  Student Writer
I'm going to tell them at last that I am a Potato alien abducted secretly by Germany.HaHaHaHaHaHaHa ' 

I need more of your medicine,author-chan! >w<Akari Akazaki (Good Job) [V3] 
TheKitKatArtist Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Need more!!
Hetalialover101anime Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
giantstorylover Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
MORE PLEASE!!! Please tell me when part 9 comes out?
Sora-Otonashi-730 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
Im loving this so far! :D
Great job and i hope you can post the next part soon >:3
Hetalialover56784 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
You are doing great! Though i don't think it should take about a year to write and submit a story i won't judge
ShadowGamer1315 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Pls continue writer-chan!! And if I can make a request.. Bring some on Ze 2p!s in :3
NoelVermillion987 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
I love this story! Make more please!
Moymashed Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
More please more I love it. I want to trust Russia the most. He helped me first.
Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014   Writer
I NEED :iconmoarplz: , :iconnaoplz: !!!!!!!
strawberrymagic68 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hi-chewy123 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
Please continue (´▽`)=b
The stories (series/ chapters) are very good!!
InternetOutcast Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
More, please?
AwesomeMaple Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist
I wants moar pleeeeaaaaassssseeeee? ;D
McKaylaDraws Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student General Artist
LoveyouCry Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
more plz!
Theanimeangel Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
Write more. Please.
PastaPyro567 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
On it! :heart:

Almost done...xD 
SwaggerJr Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
IketheCOOL Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
This is a very interesting series, write more please! (Listening to Liechtenstein's marukaite chikyuu so I feel polite because that's wut happens LOL)
TheUltimateOtaku123 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! Great job, I love this! Soooo pumped for the next part! :P
Wiggle16 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay! Another chapter, very well done. And I agree with Italy shopping is tiring.
PastaPyro567 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014

:iconitalyplz: :iconsaysplz: Ve~! Yay! ^u^ Grazie, bella~ 
Wiggle16 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome!
ItachisGirl95 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
keep up the great work!! 
PastaPyro567 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
Ah~! Danke! :heart: 
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